Writing

This is my rubric for my writing
= = =CHILD OBESEITY= =Child obesity is becoming a growing problem in New Zealand because one in twelve children aged 2 to 14 are obese one in five were overweight. To test if you are obese you use a BMI chart. This is a big problem it has grown at least five% in ten years and because of this there has been a program called the active schools I think this program works in my school and it is helping the obesity problem. In the near future I hope that the obese problem will be almost nothing.= =It is awesome to go to a active school because I know that there is lots of stuff I can do at lunch and we will go out for sport at least a week and I think that kids should bike, walk or come to school a different way other then car and this will all so help pollution in New Zealand it does not have to be every day just once a term.=
 * || **__Prestructural__** || **__Unistructural__** || **__Multistructural__** || **__Relational__** || **__Extended Abstract__** ||
 * **__Introduction__** || NO Intro at all. || Not interesting at all and only one sentence. || Two sentences no links. || Links. Three sentences. Starting to make sense. || Link with reason and interesting. ||
 * **__Paragraphs__** || No paragraphs at all. || One paragraph No titles or order. || Two big paragraphs no orders may be titles. || Starting to get 5 paragraphs titles and links in order. || Five paragraphs and titles and links and in order. ||
 * **__Description__** || No description at all. || No order a few words, no links. || No order more facts no links. || More description. || Very descriptive and interesting. ||
 * **__Conclusion__** || No conclusion at all. || A random sentence, not about the subject there are doing. || Random two sentences. || A little conclusion with only 1 fact. || Good ending, some facts, linking to the starting of the text. ||
 * **__Language__** || Speaking in tongue AKA random. || Not formal all. Mistakes. || Not as many mistakes but still not very formal. || No mistakes and more formal link better. || No mistakes, very formal. ||
 * **__Maps and Diagrams__** || No Maps or Diagrams at all. || Only one picture or diagram. || Two pictures or diagrams. || Proper maps and a diagram linking. || All the maps and diagrams link to the words. ||

=Obese children are more likely to have an allergy especially to food.= = =